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dance of life

PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 3:09 pm
by flower
Don't be afraid of what you can't
Let others take care of it
Just look what you can do
Maybe it is just one little thing
It can be worthfull
Live your life step by step
Care for the little things with love

Just dancing with the rhythm of the sea
The wind blowing in your hair
With the joy of life


Re: dance of life

PostPosted: Fri Jul 13, 2012 2:17 am
by Weak
The beginning wasn't to great, just giving my honest opinion. But I really liked the last paragraph. It was meaningfull and really symbolizes the carefree attitude I felt your poem was trying to convey.